High School Poetry - Flash From The Past
Wow - I was cleaning out an old box of papers today and I came across this poem that I submitted to a high school publication my senior year. This poem is very simplistic and not as complicated as some of the other poetry, short stories I have written, but it has always been my favorite. I don't know why...maybe b/c it was one of the first things I wrote. Hmmmm...well here it is...in simple form and all....
"Uncertainty"
The world closes around me
I don't know how to act
It stalks me every step of the way
It shows me what I lack
I try to run to no avail
It's always right behind me
I turn to the left, I turn to the right
It knows just where I'll be
It feeds upon the weak and poor
Taking whatever it can
Faster and faster it becomes
Feasting on all man
Never knowing who'll be next
It travels through our lives
Whenever one of us gets caught
A part of the world just dies
You never know where it is next
This sickening thing you never see
A bad disease without a name
This Uncertainty.
It will always be there
Stretching from land to land
At some point in our lives
We all fall prey to its evil hands
You try to escape
You try to flee
Suddenly you trip
And fall to your knees
Hoping it will spare your mind
Not knowing what to say
You keep thinking to yourself
There must be some other way
You try to think straight
Your mind isn's clear
You suddenly become distracted
By the cold and gripping fear.
You cannot stand the wait
You don't know what to believe
This chilling thing that has you
This Uncertainty
It has you in its grasp
It stares deep into your eyes
That chilling stare just kills you
And you suddenly break down and cry
You twist and you scream
With all of your might
Sending a shrilling noise
Throughout the peaceful night.
You start to scramble
Running down the street
You pray you do not fall
You want to stay on your feet
You find a dark alley
You have finally gotten away
But then you suddenly realize
It will be back another day
It never really stops
Someday you will see
This disease that catches all of us
This Uncertainty.
Yes....after reading it again, the stanza construction and rhyming pattern are among the most simple, but it is one of my favorites....again not sure why....
So there you have it...my flashback to high school poetry writing...
"Uncertainty"
The world closes around me
I don't know how to act
It stalks me every step of the way
It shows me what I lack
I try to run to no avail
It's always right behind me
I turn to the left, I turn to the right
It knows just where I'll be
It feeds upon the weak and poor
Taking whatever it can
Faster and faster it becomes
Feasting on all man
Never knowing who'll be next
It travels through our lives
Whenever one of us gets caught
A part of the world just dies
You never know where it is next
This sickening thing you never see
A bad disease without a name
This Uncertainty.
It will always be there
Stretching from land to land
At some point in our lives
We all fall prey to its evil hands
You try to escape
You try to flee
Suddenly you trip
And fall to your knees
Hoping it will spare your mind
Not knowing what to say
You keep thinking to yourself
There must be some other way
You try to think straight
Your mind isn's clear
You suddenly become distracted
By the cold and gripping fear.
You cannot stand the wait
You don't know what to believe
This chilling thing that has you
This Uncertainty
It has you in its grasp
It stares deep into your eyes
That chilling stare just kills you
And you suddenly break down and cry
You twist and you scream
With all of your might
Sending a shrilling noise
Throughout the peaceful night.
You start to scramble
Running down the street
You pray you do not fall
You want to stay on your feet
You find a dark alley
You have finally gotten away
But then you suddenly realize
It will be back another day
It never really stops
Someday you will see
This disease that catches all of us
This Uncertainty.
Yes....after reading it again, the stanza construction and rhyming pattern are among the most simple, but it is one of my favorites....again not sure why....
So there you have it...my flashback to high school poetry writing...
1 Comments:
At 6:56 PM,
M said…
I wrote this way back in high school. It is so simple, but it really spoke to me then, and I glad and honored that it spoke to you now! :-)
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